Dear Moderator
Welcome to my Media blog- I hope you enjoy it. My Research and Planning begins on September of last year. In November I began making my music magazine. My Evaluation begins in March 2012. Feel free to look through all of my posts.
Many Thanks
Bethan O'Rourke
On a positive note I like the set out of your cover page, it's really interesting and not the same as everybody's.This shows individuality and creativity.
ReplyDeleteAn area of improvement could be the font size on your contents page, just to make it look a bit more like a traditional magazine contents.
hi! This is great Bethan, I really like the house style that is used. The colours and fonts are really suitable for a College Magazine and I think you've done really well.
ReplyDeleteI like your font style as I think it is appropriate for your target audience and the colours you have used throughout.
ReplyDeleteTo improve this i think your should make your contents page stories a smaller font and include more stories.
I really like the use of colour, and I think the stories look really good. I like how the text has a theme and is used throughout your work. I think to improve you could edit the pictures so they're not just block box's, maybe add borders?
ReplyDeleteOverall I think your work looks really good :)
i really like the way you've layout your front cover its really eye catching and looks professional. you've kept a consistent colour scheme which is important
ReplyDeleteonly improvement is maybe have a background colour
Your magazine look really professional as the colour scheme runs from the cover to the contents page, it is also consistent and eye-catching, to improve you could maybe add a background cover or fill in some white spaces.
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